Mandah the Creator: The Story How Earth Was Created
In the beginning, there was a goddess, Mandah, our creator. Then there was the god, Bec, Mandah's companion. Then the was evil. Another goddess appeared named Nadia but she was an evil spirit. One day Mandah and Nadia grew very angry at each other while Bec was sleeping. They gathered hard rock to attack each other. They threw their rock at each other at the same time. Their rock clashed into one great mass, creating Earth. Mandah and Nadia circled the rocky mass and eventually crossed. Nadia grabbed Mandah and slammed her to the ground. Bec was awakened by the loud crash and went to go see what happened. He floated to the massive rock and saw Mandah dead. He climbed onto a cloud for a better look. He cried and cried making the Earth covered in water. He was so depressed that he decided he wanted to die too. Little did he know, Mandah was still alive.
Mandah awoke to great pain and a baby in her arms. She named the baby girl, Jersey. Mandah stood up with the baby in her hands and created land over the water. But not much was created due to her being quite weak. Mandah set the baby down in and leaped up to go tell Bec what happened. She was in mid-leap and saw a man lying dead who looked very much
like Bec. She paused and floated over to the man. She brushed her hand across his cheek and then knew it was Bec. She cut off his ear and cut out one of his eyes. She threw them up into the sky creating the sun and the moon. Then she extracted his blood and put it into a pail. Then she burned Bec into ashes. Then she gathered the ashes into her hands and sprinkled them into the sky like faerie dust creating stars. She dropped the
pail safely onto the land. She went to search for Nadia. She eventually found her. She grabbed Nadia by the hair and threw her to the center of the Earth which
is now present day Hell.
After she sent Nadia to the underworld she went back to Earth and moped around in grief due to the
loss of her beloved companion. She dragged her feet through parts of the land, creating rivers and lakes. But some didn't fill with water, like the Grand Canyon. The grand Canyon filled with very little water. She created plants and trees to fill up the empty space,
many green and bright colors. Nadia saw the roots of Mandah's plants, and
tried to pull them out but Mandah set a spell on the roots. So Nadia decided to push up evil. She pushed up the torturous Poison Ivy and the Oleander. Mandah tapped her finger on her lip thinking of what Nadia did. She came to the conclusion that it was okay, humans she planned to create, can't shine brighter than the stars so she accepted Nadia's creation reluctantly. She had a flash of bad thoughts then wanted to destroy Nadia's creations. But Nadia made them to harmful for Mandah to even try and destroy them. She brushed off the bad thoughts, then continued with her creations. She created animals to occupy the plants and trees and to fill up other space. Nadia heard the continuous flapping of the wings and footsteps, the worst part was they were good. Nadia popped up some of the evilest animals,
such as the Mosquito, Asian Cobra, and the Box Jellyfish.
Mandah wasn't finished yet. She grabbed her pail of blood. She poured blood into human shaped cookie cutters. Then she cut human forms out of tortilla shells and put them in the bottom and top of the cookie cutters. Mandah grabbed the cookie cutter out and pressed the ends together. The humans looked all dead and didn't move at all, so she breathed life into them. She made them just right so they wouldn't shine brighter than the stars. Mandah feared being overthrown by humans. Mandah made Jersey as old as a toddler. So Mandah's new world wouldn't get over populated, she created a tragedy, death. She turned Jersey invisible to the human eye but clearly visible to Mandah. Jersey was one hungry toddler. Mandah begged for Jersey to do it quick and painless. Jesery tried to do as her mother asked but it didn't always work out due to Jersey being so young. Mandah took her place on the clouds and smiled down at her creations. It was time for her to sit back and rest. But not all was perfect. Mandah didn't put a spell on the humans because she thought that these humans should be smart enough to take care of themselves and be responsible. So Nadia grabbed select people and turned them into one of her minions and popped them back up to create evil around the world. Jersey doesn't care for the evil because they taste cold and burnt. So Jersey sucks the life out of the bad and puts them down with Nadia. But since Nadia doesn't have the gift of human life, the evil spirits live down in the underworld.
Since the evil are well evil sometimes they turn on Nadia but she burns them if they do wrong, but even though she can do that it still is torture down there. Ever so often,
she'll stick both hands into the top and pull them apart to try and get up. In which creates earthquakes. The softest part in land for Nadia was the mountains. She'd poke a whole and try and see but since it was a mountain she couldn't see so she'd grow very angry and create a volcano.
(Make sure your verb tense stays the same. For example, if you start your story using past tense ("she dragged, she created," etc. don't switch to "grabs, turns," etc.)
Mandah the Creator: The Story How Earth Was Created
In the beginning, there was a goddess, Mandah, our creator. Then there was the god, Bec, Mandah's companion. Then the was evil. Another goddess appeared
named Nadia but she was an evil spirit. One day Mandah and Nadia grew very angry at each other while Bec was sleeping. They gathered hard rock to attack each other. They threw their rock at each other at the same time. Their rock clashed into one great mass, creating Earth. Mandah and Nadia circled the rocky mass and eventually crossed. Nadia grabbed Mandah and slammed her to the ground. Bec was awakened by the loud crash and went to go see what happened. He floated to the massive rock and saw Mandah dead. He climbed onto a cloud for a better look. He cried and cried making the Earth covered in water. He was so depressed that he decided he wanted to die too. Little did he know, Mandah was still alive.
Mandah awoke to great pain and a baby in her arms. She named the baby girl, Jersey. Mandah stood up with the baby in her hands and created land over the water. But not much was created due to her being quite weak. Mandah set the baby down in and leaped up to go tell Bec what happened. She was in mid-leap and saw a man lying dead who looked very much
like Bec. She paused and floated over to the man. She brushed her hand across his cheek and then knew it was Bec. She cut off his ear and cut out one of his eyes. She threw them up into the sky creating the sun and the moon. Then she extracted his blood and put it into a pail. Then she burned Bec into ashes. Then she gathered the ashes into her hands and sprinkled them into the sky like faerie dust creating stars. She dropped the
pail safely onto the land. She went to search for Nadia. She eventually found her. She grabbed Nadia by the hair and threw her to the center of the Earth which
is now present day Hell.
After she sent Nadia to the underworld she went back to Earth and moped around in grief due to the
loss of her beloved companion. She dragged her feet through parts of the land, creating rivers and lakes. But some didn't fill with water, like the Grand Canyon. The grand Canyon filled with very little water. She created plants and trees to fill up the empty space,
many green and bright colors. Nadia saw the roots of Mandah's plants, and
tried to pull them out but Mandah set a spell on the roots. So Nadia decided to push up evil. She pushed up the torturous Poison Ivy and the Oleander. Mandah tapped her finger on her lip thinking of what Nadia did. She came to the conclusion that it was okay, humans she planned to create, can't shine brighter than the stars so she accepted Nadia's creation reluctantly. She had a flash of bad thoughts then wanted to destroy Nadia's creations. But Nadia made them to harmful for Mandah to even try and destroy them. She brushed off the bad thoughts, then continued with her creations. She created animals to occupy the plants and trees and to fill up other space. Nadia heard the continuous flapping of the wings and footsteps, the worst part was they were good. Nadia popped up some of the evilest animals,
such as the Mosquito, Asian Cobra, and the Box Jellyfish.
Mandah wasn't finished yet. She grabbed her pail of blood. She poured blood into human shaped cookie cutters. Then she cut human forms out of tortilla shells and put them in the bottom and top of the cookie cutters. Mandah grabbed the cookie cutter out and pressed the ends together. The humans looked all dead and didn't move at all, so she breathed life into them. She made them just right so they wouldn't shine brighter than the stars. Mandah feared being overthrown by humans. Mandah made Jersey as old as a toddler. So Mandah's new world wouldn't get over populated, she created a tragedy, death. She turned Jersey invisible to the human eye but clearly visible to Mandah. Jersey was one hungry toddler. Mandah begged for Jersey to do it quick and painless. Jesery tried to do as her mother asked but it
didn't always work out due to Jersey being so young. Mandah took her place on the clouds and smiled down at her creations. It was time for her to sit back and rest. But not all was perfect. Mandah didn't put a spell on the humans because she thought that these humans should be smart enough to take care of
themselves and be responsible. So Nadia grabbed select people and turned them into one of her minions and popped them back up to create evil around the world. Jersey doesn't care for the evil because they taste cold and burnt. So Jersey sucks the life out of the bad and puts them down with Nadia. But since Nadia doesn't have the gift of human life, the evil spirits live down in the underworld.
Since the evil are well evil sometimes they turn on Nadia but she burns them if they do wrong, but even though she can do that it still is torture down there. Ever so often,
she'll stick both hands into the top and pull them apart to try and get up. In which creates earthquakes. The softest part in land for Nadia was the mountains. She'd poke a whole and try and see but since it was a mountain she couldn't see so she'd grow very angry and create a volcano.
(Make sure your verb tense stays the same. For example, if you start your story using past tense ("she dragged, she created," etc. don't switch to "grabs, turns," etc.)